FEEDBACK REVIEW
What the feedback said:
In the feedback from my first assessment task, it said “your creation of 3 separate sections within your blog post is all a clever design decision” and although it said this I do think that I could improve the overall layout of my website. The feedback also said “the content is extensively researched” and I also think this could be improved by adding a little more information. The feedback from one of the peer reviews for my first assessment task said “I think his site is absolutely wonderful, although he could have added and edited a few more photos in Photoshop.”
In the feedback from my second assessment task, it said that to improve I should add a slide in my prezi that clearly explains the Sub-tools within the liquify tool. One other improvement it said was that I could add some before and after images using the liquify tool to my prezi. Adding these improvements would make my prezi flow better and easier to understand.
What I plan to do to about the feedback:
First of all to improve my website I am going to improve the layout of my website by adding some widgets (this will make my website easier to navigate). Next I will add a section within my research about various architects throughout history. To improve my gallery within my website I will add some photos that I have found and also add 5 more Photoshop images edited by me.
What I plan to improve in my prezi for the second assessment task is to add some before and after shots of images I have edited using the liquify tool (this will give the viewer some ideas about what they can do when editing their photo). One other thing I plan to do is to improve my Prezi is to add a slide into my prezi that informs the viewer about the sub-tools within the liquify tool (this will make the prezi easier to understand).
What I have done to improve my website and Prezi:
For my website I have improved the following:
- Gallery (I have added more photos including Photoshopped ones)
- Blog (In the history section, I have added some information on the various architects throughout history)
- Overall layout and design (I have added some widgets so that the website functions better)
- Polls (I have added a few more polls throughout my website to make it more engaging for the viewer)
For my prezi I have improved the following:
- Sub-Tools (I have made a slide within my Prezi that informs the viewer about the various effects within the liquify tool)
- Before and after images (I have added some photos that I have manipulated using the liquify tool so that the viewer can visualize what it could look like after)
Overall I think that these changes have made a big difference in my website and Prezi both aesthetically and also to the content.
Architecture 